Tuesday, 21 February 2012

DETECTIVE BROTHERS FULL STORY


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                      THE DETECTIVE BROTHERS

                          THE MURDER OF A CITIZEN

                                    

                               INDEX

                               

1 – MAN WITH THE LONG BOOTS AND MASK.

2 - MICHAEL AND JOHN.

3 – THEIR NEW CASE.

4 – THE MAN WHO CLAIMS TO RAISE THE DEAD!                       

5 – TRAFFIC JAM                       

6 – THEIR JOURNEY

7- THEIR SEARCH

8 – THEIR NEW FRIEND

9 – CRIME SCENE

10 – JOHN’S INVESTIGATION.

11 – MICHEAL’S INVESTIGATION.

12 – WHAT HAPPENED TO JOHN?

13 – THE TRUTH.

14 – THE TRUE TRUTH!

 

 




























1- THE MAN WITH THE LONG BOOTS AND A MASK.




MARCH 12TH, 2011, CHICAGO,

On a busy day……………..

A car was driving through a busy road. Then suddenly a car jumped into the front of this car. The car screeched and made a stop, so near to the 2nd car.

“Yo, watch your way man”, said the man in the 1st car. The driver in the 1st car could not see him because the window glass were black in color and when somebody looks at it they could not see the man who is sitting inside the car but the man who were sitting inside the car could see the man standing outside. This is a common thing happening.
                     
The car driver got out of the car and went to the 2nd car.  He went near to that car then before he could stand a step forward, the door of the 2nd car opened. A man with a long boot came out. He was wearing a mask.

Then the whole thing changed, the man with the long boots grabbed onto mans neck and pushed him. He fell down. The man with the mask took a gun from his pocket and FIRED HIM. BAAAAANG. .





                                       


                                                   


2 – MICHAEL AND JOHN



INDRODUCTION OF MAIN CHARECTERS:  MICHAEL – HE IS 26 YEARS OLD
                                                                       JHON – HE IS 24 YEARS OLD.

                                                                       MANAGER OF SIA-Christie - HE IS 54 YEARS OLD.

These brothers joined this group at 2008.




AT MARCH 13th 2011, SECRET INVESTIGATION AGENCY’S MAIN OFFICE, NEWYORK,


“Hey Michael, How about going for a vacation trip to some where?” asked John. “We have been worked so many cases. We are working here for almost 3 years.”

“No we have only been 2 years and on this November it will be 3 years”, said Michael, He was reading a book called “SHERLOCK HOLMES” It was written by SIR ARTHUR CONNAN DOYLE”. “About the vacation, yeah we could have one for sure.”



                                     
                                          
                                         
      
3 – THEIR NEW CASE

“Sorry to interrupt you guys”, said the manager of SIA, Christie. “I have heard your conversation, but guys sorry that you can’t go to your vacation but I promise you that if you finish this case brilliantly then you will get a tour package to MIAMI AND LAS VEGAS. AND your new case is about a murder which was held at Chicago City yesterday.”

“Yesterday?” asked Michael. “What kind of accident was it?”

“You sound as if you always read news paper”, said John.

“No but………..” started Michael.

“Hey stop arguing brothers. Now listen. This is the news HEAD LINES OF TIMES OF NEW YORK:


TODAYS NEWS: 1 KILLED AT CHICAGO

An ACCIDENT TOOK PLACE AT NEW YORK YESTERDAY. A CAR WAS DRIVING THROUGH THE RIGHT SIDE OF THE ROAD. THEN SUDDENLY A CAR TOOK A CURVE THEN SKIDDED AND STOPPED IN THE FRONT THE 1ST CAR. THE MAN IN THE 1ST CAR GOT ANGRY AND GOT OUT OF THE CAR AND WENT NEAR THE 2ND CAR. THE MAN INSIDE THE CAR GOT OUT. HE WAS HAVING LONG BOOTS AND A MASK. HE THEN GRABBED THE DRIVER OF THE FIRST CARS DRIVERS NECK AND PUSHED HIM AWAY. THEN THE MAN WITH THE MASK TOOK A GUN AND SHOOTED HIM AND BEFORE THE POLICE ARRIVED THE GUY ESCAPED.
                                 THESE WERE SAID BY SOME OF THE WITNESSES.













4 – THE MAN WHO CLAIMS TO RAISE THE DEAD!  

THE NEXT MORNING, IT WAS 5:30.

There was a knock at the door of the bedroom of Michael and John. Both of them were changing their dresses for their journey.

“John someone is at the door”, said Michael. “I think it maybe our manager.”

“Yeah”, said Michael. “Coming one minute”.

 Michael went and opened the door and saw no one and when he was about to turn away when he saw a letter lying down.




“Who is it John?” asked Michael.

“It’s a letter”, said John

                                            
                                                      
“From whom”

“It’s from a man called Blackwood.”
“What does it contain?”

John opened the letter.

“What does it say?” Asked Michael.

He read it and passed on to Michael.

“See it yourself”, said John.

DEAR FRIENDS,

MY NAME IS GEORGE BLACKWOOD. I LIVE IN LONDON. I WORK AT A CHURCH CALLED LOUIS II CHURCH. I  SAY NOW THAT YOU MUST RETRIVE FROM THIS CASE BOYS  OTHERWISE YOU WILL SUFFER PAIN WHICH WILL LEAD TO DEATH.
HEHEHE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA


 BY YOUR UNDERTAKER,

GEORGE BLACK WOOD.



“Who is this guy”, asked Michael as he finished reading.

“Don’t know”, said John. “Michael could you take my laptop please? Maybe the search engines will have a reply on this.”

“Yep”

He took John’s Laptop, signed in, took internet connections and in the search engine he typed

GOOGLE SEARCH- GEORGE BLACKWOOD OF LONDON.
                                               


 And pressed the enter button.

So many results came in that what struck Michaels eyes was – George Blackwood, London.

He clicked that site. It Read like this……………..

George Blackwood is a black magician who lives at London. He is the most afraid person of London; if some one arrested him then he would be dead the other day. He himself claims to raise the dead.

“Hey John this says that he is a black magician and …..”, before he could finish the door of the room swung open.

It was the manager.

“You made us scare”, said Michaels.

“Not us, YOU”, said John.

The Manager heard their whole story and burst out laughing.

“I am so sorry guys the man may have wrongly put that letter here.”, said manager.

“HOOOOO”, said John. “What a relief!”












           





                                                        

5- A TRAFFIC JAM

MORNING 7:30

“Manager could you make a phone call to the Chicago police to Secure the Scene”, asked John.

“Already done that Boys.” said Manager.

“Then at which way will the traffic go?” Asked Michael.

“There is another way to get to the main road”, said Manager. “So you would better go to the scene and get evidences and make the road free.”

“Will go by 9:30 today.” said Michael.

“Good”



                                        
6 – THEIR JOURNEY.

MORNING AT 9:30

“John we are at the perfect time for the flight.” said Michael.

“Yeah”, said John.

They were at the correct time to get the flight to go to Chicago to investigate the crime scene.
 
AT 3:30, Chicago

They reached Chicago. John and Michael came out of the Air port. There they were to be picked up by a man called Siatorme~.

“Where is this guy called “SIATORMEEE”?” Said John.


                                          
“Let me correct you this time”, said Michael. “His name is not “SIATOMEEE”, his name is “SIATOME~”. S-I-A—T-O-M-E~”

“What ever sir”, said John.

“Now where the hell is he?”

“We don’t know where he is, there are almost a twenty, thirty people waiting for other people.” Said Michael.

 “Fool, take a look at the description about this person given by the manager.”

“Ooh forgot about it”

Michael took the description which was given by the manager.

                    


















                          

7 – THEIR SEARCH


THIS MAN IS ABOUT 6’6HIEGHT AND 200 LBS. AND WOULD BE STANDING WITH A BOARD WITH BOTH OF YOUR NAMES WRITTEN.

 “This says that he is a guy with 6 feet and 6inch height”, said Michael by reading it. “And not so fat but minimum fat and he would be having a board with our names on it. This is all which is written”.

“Now you search that side and I will search the other side”, said john. “And if you find him then give me a ring”

They almost searched every where and they both ended up where they started first. Both of them were disappointed.















8 – THEIR NEW FRIEND.


Finally they were tired and were sitting there in an arm chair. Then Michael just looked at the entrance of the air port. There he saw a man with a board-

MICHAEL AND JOHN


 “Look at there a man with a board and it has our names too. This must be him.” Said Michael.

John turned and looked at him and Michael was correct.

He was 6 feet tall and not as fat as they thought and as described in the paper. They went to him.

“Are you Mr.Siatome~?” asked John

“Yep, it’s me”, said Siatome~. “And you can call me “Mathew” because my original name at Chicago is Mathew and about 4 years ago I went Spain for a mission with my companion that is your Manager and he also changed his name into “Siamone~” and we preferred to be as twins and we almost finished their mission and after that we both retired and I lived here and now I am the chief of the FBI at Chicago. When I joined FBI, I called him to come to join FBI, so that we could work together. And I hope you know all about the case my dear boys and don’t waste time describing yourself because he have given all the information about you both and your cases”. All this time they were walking to where his car was parked.




“Come don’t worry I have the license to drive these Ponies”, said Mathew who is Siatome. “Get in boys”

They both got inside and last Mathew got inside. He drove out of the parking lot and some time later they were driving through a busy city.

“From yesterday this block started”, Mathew said by turning “on” the police Alarm so that everybody moves away. (Double click the sound button to hear alarm)




















9 – CRIME SCENE 



They finally reached the marked crime scene. Both Michael and John got out of the car and investigated the place. John went for looking if there were any discarded weapon or any clue. And Michael went to see the witnesses.

                                             

                                         



10 – John’s Investigation.

John went around the body and went near a grassy place and carefully looked at the grass. There when he cautiously looked, he saw an identity card. He took it up and had a look.

      IDENTITY CARD


NAME – JOHNSON
WORK – NIL
PHONE – 6489212
ADDRESS- GARDEN VILLE, CHICAGO.

“Want to find “Johnson” tomorrow itself.” He thought.

He then looked for more evidences and while coming back from the grassy place he noticed a LONG BOOT. He took that with a tissue paper and put in plastic bag which most of the detectives carry with them. He carefully examined the boots all the way to the scene.











11 – MICHAEL’S INVESTIGATION.

Michael went to the man who claimed to have seen everything.

“Hello friend, my name is Michael and that’s my brother over there.” Said Michael by pointing John. “His name is John. We are brothers and we are here to investigate the crime scene”.

“Ok sir; let me begin with my name. My name is Silver McCartin.” Said Mr. McCartin. “And Yesterday morning me and my wife Mrs.McCartin were coming back from a shop then a car came and stopped at front of another car and the man who blocked the car fired the man with a gun and BAAANG  (Double click the sound button to hear the firing sound) the man in the other vehicle was dead.”

“Did both men get out?”

“Yes”

“Then why didn’t you tell it before?”

“Sir I am 65 year old”

“OK then sometimes you will need to come to the station and before you go can you give me your, that mobile”
The man was having a mobile in his hand which he hid from Michael by holding his hand behind.



“Why?’

“I saw that you were recording the conversation”

The man; without a prediction closed the door.

“Sir please open the door, other wise we could get you in trouble”

There was no reply.

“John we have a problem.” Cried Michael loudly. “John come here, Mathew, you call the other cops and secure the backside.”

John came near and Michael, then Michael told what happened. While the other cops and Mathew got at backside of the house. And other some cops at other sides.

“Sir please open the door otherwise we would smash your door.” Said John.

Now everybody including the brothers was ready for a firing. They held up their guns and they both smashed up the door and the suspect was standing in the front with a time bomb.



“EVERY BODY RETRIVE, THERE’S A BOMB IN HIS HAND”, said John by grabbing Michael’s hand and running outside.

He told Michael to stand where he is. John went inside the house. THEY HEARD FIRING.























12 – WHAT HAPPENED TO JOHN?

“Hey guy put the bomb away, I say that you put that bomb away.” Said John.

“NO, I will not put it down”, replied McCartin.

The seconds at the time bomb was visible to John. It read 20, 19, 18,

“Come on man drop it otherwise you would be dead and I would be dead”

10, 9, 8,


“No time to talk”, said John by spearing on his stomach (now the bomb falls down from the hands of the suspect) and going fast as a Rhino and hit the back door and jumped.

2, 1
BAAANG the whole house exploded.

After that some ambulances came to take the suspect because he was fired by John. And also fire engines arrived to extinguish the fire.

  









13 – THE TRUTH

“Why did you try to kill yourself? And destroy all the evidences? And who planned all this?” asked John.

 

The man now was in prison and for the investigation he was brought to Investigation Chamber.

He didn’t reply.

“Come on man answer my questions”

“NO”

“COME ON, ANSWER ME”, said John angrily.

“Ok, Ok,” said McCartin. “I will say. Before you came here, before the accident, the dead man Mr. Billy and Mr. Johnson were rivalries. They used to be good lads but one day when Johnson asked for money for playing in the casino, Billy refused to give him the money. Then he came to me to ask for money. I too refused to give money. He told us that we both wouldn’t be alive, and would be killed the next day. The next day I wasn’t killed but Billy was.”

“So you think that Johnson may have done that?” asked Michael.

“Yes” said McCartin

 “Thank you McCartin for telling this much.” Said John. Both of them went out. When they came out, they saw Mathews

“Good job brave boy for saving this treasure clue”, said Mathew. “What about talking to him?”

“Nothing so much, we have some thing to do, see you tomorrow.”

“Ok then”, said Mathews disappointingly.

AT THEIR APARTMENT,

“Hey Michael have a good sleep.” Said John.

 “Don’t say that you are going to sit up all the night and think about the case like last time”, said Michael

“Yep, I am”

 “Anyway I am going to sleep”.





14 – THE TRUE TRUTH!

“I solved the case!” said John. “I have almost deduced what happened.”

“What really?” said Michael. “Then don’t tell me now what happened, let’s go to the police station and tell about the case.”

“Before you do that”, said John. “Can you call Mathew then some cops…not some cops but many”

AT THE U.S POLICE HEADQUATERS

There was Mathews, the suspect McCartin, Johnson, brothers and some cops.
“Hello everybody! Today our detective brothers as you already know have solved another great mystery. Now John is going to explain how it was done.” Said Mathew

“Thank you Mathew for your introduction.” Said John. “Now to the case,-
AT MARCH 11th
Our suspect Mr. McCartin, who is standing before you, went to the house of Mr. Billy. There they had a quarrel about money issue- and what was it Mr. McCartin? There is no way that you could escape from this. Because there is an eye witness and he is Mr. Johnson.”

“Ok, I will say- it happened like this” McCartin explains-

“Can you give me some money”, I asked to Billy.

“No”, he replied. He was very stern about it. At that time Mr. Johnson came in. I asked him too and he also refused to give me the money. And with anger I said that I would kill them both the next day. But the next day at Front of my home while I came out to take the newspaper I saw all that killing.”

“Is it true Mr. John?” asked Mathew.

“Yes it is”, said John

“Then who is the real murderer?” asked Michael.

“The real Murder is …………. Mathews or Siatome~.” said John.

Everybody in the department was shocked to hear this.

“A...A...A...NY Evidence?” asked Mathews.
“Yes there is my friend.” Said John. “You have an intelligent brain Mathew.
It all happened like this- Mathews went to the house of Mr. Billy and heard the conversation between all of them. Then from his childhood itself his enemy was this suspect McCartin and he finally got a chance to take revenge indirectly with McCartin as his father killed Mathew’s father. And in this mind the next day he waited for the vehicle of Mr. Billy to come and when he saw the car taking a curve he took his car into the middle of the road and got out and shot him. The next day that is 13th of March at morning some time Mathews came to the scene and placed Johnson’s identity card. But he left out his long boots accidentally. The next day when we reached there he was late because he forgot about it in the tension. And when he reached at the airport I noticed that he was sweating so much. Then after we finished our first round of investigation Mathews came and asked about what McCartin said and I purposefully avoided him and I have also noticed his disappointment. And for taking his revenge against McCartIN he killed Mr. Billy. The story I told is correct or not Mr. Mathews?”

“Yes”

FINALLY HE WAS ARRESTED AND SENT TO JAIL AND McCARTIN WAS REALEASED FROM THE JAIL.

“How did you understand that Mathew’s placed Johnson’s card in the field?” asked Michael.

“I understood by seeing the wetness of the card and the mark of the dead body. The mark of the dead body was drawn a day before and the card and the boots seemed to be fresher than the marked line. And also did you notice that Mathews at airport had a long boot shoe in one and a normal in the other and when I got the other boot it was confirmed”, said John.

“Nothing more”

                                          THE END……

 

WRITTEN BY SHIVSHANKAR H.S


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